Post by Kelli♥Belli on Aug 15, 2008 21:52:43 GMT
This is a "Comments & Critiques" show and I will be giving you critique when the show is judged so that you can either keep up the good work, or use the advice to better your pose.
[glow=teal,2,300]Rules:[/glow]
1. 1 entry per person.
2. Closes at 5 entries, entries beyond that will be disregarded. If it happens too many times I will not allow you to enter my shows.
3. Both Dali or Profile pose accepted.
4. Must Face right. No Picture-flipping.
5. Must be a FULLGROWN adult.
6. No editing besides a SMALL watermark to claim your pose.
7. Small clothing articles or toys/accessories allowed. (Bows, Collars, tags, ect.)
8. NO SPAMMING THE SHOW THREAD AND NO BICKERING. If this happens more than once, you will not be allowed to enter my shows.
Note: The comments and critiques are not optional. If you don't want to know what your pose looks like to a judge then don't enter. However know that I'm more than willing to help you with your pose if you ask.
[glow=teal,2,300]Form:[/glow]
Show Name
Call Name
Points (optional)
Standard points awarded (5-1)
BIS- Gotham/Meepit's Disliked Most Human Beings
1st- Spaniel's Why So Serious?
2nd- MGCh. DaY's Tiedän Vähemmän Kuin Luulen
3rd- Gotham's What Makes You Different
4th- Canine's Love Warrior
Cedar- Legs are aligned...I can't find any leg/heel showing where it shouldn't be. Head is centered. Great job.
Joker- Like I said before, legs are well aligned, head is high, nose is good, ears good. Only a tiny bit of leg showing behind the back foot. All over this is a very good pose.
Teito- His chest is puffed out, his head is centered, his nose shines are spread out and nose has a dip, ears look great. Everything lokos great for this pose. The only thing that might catch someone's eye is the amount of leg shiowing in the front. Although I realize you aligned by the back legs and that is acceptable for an original breed pose others don't always know about ob poses. (Obviously their legs aren't as easily aligned as hexed breeds).
Abundant- His legs look good but his head throws me off. It looks like it could be turned more towards the center. And the one nose shine thing could get in the way of showing.
Ami- There is quite a bit of leg showing behind the back leg. Also, you can see the second nose shine peeking out (you should only be able to see one). What you want to do is make sure there is no leg behind the back leg. And a tip for getting the head to look good is that there should be some fur showing inbetween the eyes. In your dogz pose you just see the eye ball and no fur, meaning it's not centered (as well as the second nose shine showing. I hope that made sense =P. Your off to a good start.
[glow=teal,2,300]Rules:[/glow]
1. 1 entry per person.
2. Closes at 5 entries, entries beyond that will be disregarded. If it happens too many times I will not allow you to enter my shows.
3. Both Dali or Profile pose accepted.
4. Must Face right. No Picture-flipping.
5. Must be a FULLGROWN adult.
6. No editing besides a SMALL watermark to claim your pose.
7. Small clothing articles or toys/accessories allowed. (Bows, Collars, tags, ect.)
8. NO SPAMMING THE SHOW THREAD AND NO BICKERING. If this happens more than once, you will not be allowed to enter my shows.
Note: The comments and critiques are not optional. If you don't want to know what your pose looks like to a judge then don't enter. However know that I'm more than willing to help you with your pose if you ask.
[glow=teal,2,300]Form:[/glow]
Show Name
Call Name
Points (optional)
Standard points awarded (5-1)
BIS- Gotham/Meepit's Disliked Most Human Beings
1st- Spaniel's Why So Serious?
2nd- MGCh. DaY's Tiedän Vähemmän Kuin Luulen
3rd- Gotham's What Makes You Different
4th- Canine's Love Warrior
Cedar- Legs are aligned...I can't find any leg/heel showing where it shouldn't be. Head is centered. Great job.
Joker- Like I said before, legs are well aligned, head is high, nose is good, ears good. Only a tiny bit of leg showing behind the back foot. All over this is a very good pose.
Teito- His chest is puffed out, his head is centered, his nose shines are spread out and nose has a dip, ears look great. Everything lokos great for this pose. The only thing that might catch someone's eye is the amount of leg shiowing in the front. Although I realize you aligned by the back legs and that is acceptable for an original breed pose others don't always know about ob poses. (Obviously their legs aren't as easily aligned as hexed breeds).
Abundant- His legs look good but his head throws me off. It looks like it could be turned more towards the center. And the one nose shine thing could get in the way of showing.
Ami- There is quite a bit of leg showing behind the back leg. Also, you can see the second nose shine peeking out (you should only be able to see one). What you want to do is make sure there is no leg behind the back leg. And a tip for getting the head to look good is that there should be some fur showing inbetween the eyes. In your dogz pose you just see the eye ball and no fur, meaning it's not centered (as well as the second nose shine showing. I hope that made sense =P. Your off to a good start.
